Thursday, 1 November 2018

going on the boat

In the sunny weekend me and my dad were going on the boat
today.
We were going to the beach.
Me and dad are going to
get lots of fish and more sea thing's.
Dad are we are going to be out there for long” I said.
When we got to the beach I hopped in the boat and
dad went to take the boat into the sea.
When the boat was in the water dad hopped in with me.
Then me and dad were set to go. So we took off.
We were out for a long time because we got
fish and more fish

The end. By keiha

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