In this process, I was writing about the environment is my responsibility because we have been going to environments to clean up the area so no rubbish goes into the rivers or streams.
Something I struggled with my writing but managed to overcome was when people were taking to each other about something else.
This was fun writing about the Environment is my Responsibility I might do some more in the school holidays.
Greetings Keiha.
ReplyDeleteI really liked the way you did your paragraphs with a nice amount of full sentences. I also liked the way that you did a bibliography in your writing. I really liked the sentence I believe that healthy ecosystems clean our water, air and soil. There are somethings you could do next time to fix your writing and that is to write down more full sentences into your paragraphs and get so much more that you will get more paragraphs.
From Tuturi.